Umm cause you are new writing like me 😭 i can tell you but don't mind it personally 👀🥲 it's not necessary to introduce all the characters in the begging just like in the first ep. It confuses the reader 😭😭 keep dialogue sounds like real or try to use words like whisper, excitement, tensed, panic.. etc. try to read books from real authors 🥹 will help you in many ways specially the idea how to actually start writting 😭
try role play with your friends or any Ai will help you with dialogues 🥹
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Umm cause you are new writing like me 😭 i can tell you but don't mind it personally 👀🥲
it's not necessary to introduce all the characters in the begging just like in the first ep. It confuses the reader 😭😭
keep dialogue sounds like real or try to use words like whisper, excitement, tensed, panic.. etc.
try to read books from real authors 🥹 will help you in many ways specially the idea how to actually start writting 😭
try role play with your friends or any Ai
will help you with dialogues
🥹
2025-10-06
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