Angelica: A Cinderella Retell
Chapter 1- The Celeborn family
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I just want to make some things clear
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This chat story will be in a medieval (historical) setting
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Thoughts will be placed in bracket for example [Why am I here]
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Actions, expressions or emotions will be placed in stars for example *shocked*, *Screams in pain*, *Frowns in confusion*
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If u have any questions make sure to ask in the comments section
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Let's start ☝️☝️
Angelica Celeborn/fl
Coming mother!
Angelica hastily wipes her hand over her dirty apron before running from the kitchen where she was making breakfast for her 'lovely' mother and sisters to the dinning room where they all sat arguing over the dumbest thing ever.
She ignored the mocking giggles and glances her sisters shot at her as she passed by them to her mother.
Angelica Celeborn/fl
You called for me, mother?
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Why ask such a meaningless question when you came here obviously because I called you, hmm? *glares at Angelica*
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*Bows her head politely* My most sincere apologies, mother *rolls her eyes secretly before forcing a sweet smile*
Grace fisher/fl's mother
*nods in approval and clears her throat*
Angelica Celeborn/fl
May I ask why you called me? ☺️☺️
Grace tried to talk only to be interrupted by her daughters noise
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*shakes her head internally* [Dumb as usual]😒😒
Angelica Celeborn/fl
[Why are my sisters so... dumb and annoying? All they do is whine and cry. If mother knew what I was thinking about she'd call me a she-devil since I'm apparently a evil lass who wishes her sisters bad]😒😒
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Girls, quiet down
Emiliana Celeborn/fl's sister
But mother... *teary eyed* We just wanted to know what pet was better...*sobs childishly*😭😭
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*Sighs* [Sooooo childish]
Grace fisher/fl's mother
😔😔😔 I'm sorry my lovely babies. I didn't mean to yell at you all.
Grace fisher/fl's mother
When I'm done speaking to Angelica here, you can all commence with your meaningful debates
All five of the sisters echoed a 'yes mother' before keeping quiet
Angelica Celeborn/fl
[Sometimes... I think I'm adopted, and honestly I'd be happy if I was. It has to be a crime to share blood with these... not so sensible people]
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Where is our breakfast??
Angelica Celeborn/fl
I'm not done preparing it
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Well be quick about it. My cubs are hungry right girls??
Once again all five sisters echoed a 'yes mother'
Grace fisher/fl's mother
You heard them. Now run along
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*Frowns in disgust as the family converse* I'm sorry to say mother, but I would have been done preparing breakfast if I had help in the kitchen
Evangelina Celeborn/fl's sister
*Gasp* Are you implying we come help you in that dirty kitchen 😱😱
Emiliana Celeborn/fl's sister
No way!!! 😭😭
Celadina Celeborn/fl's sister
I would never step foot in that kitchen, hmph😒😒
Ariana Celeborn/fl's sister
That's the only thing you're useful for, dear sister after all you're not really appealing to the eyes like us😔😔😔
Angelica Celeborn/fl
Did you just call me ugly?😑😑😑
Juliana Celeborn/fl's sister
Well technically she didn't call you... Ugly, she called you unappealing to the eyes 😊😊😊
Those are two different things
Angelica Celeborn/fl
But they mean the exact same thing 😑😑😑
Ariana Celeborn/fl's sister
Whatever. We're never gonna be helping you in the kitchen, right mother??
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Of course darling. That's your job Angelica
Angelica Celeborn/fl
But mother-
Grace fisher/fl's mother
What? Do you want me to join you in the kitchen??
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*pauses* Well... I wouldn't reject the offer-
Grace fisher/fl's mother
How dare you!!
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*sighs* I apologize mother, but breakfast would be quicker if I had the help of one of my sisters
Angelica Celeborn/fl
[You guys cannot really blame me for wanting to push years of my burdens unto any of my sisters shoulder]
Grace fisher/fl's mother
I will not allow any of my cubs into the kitchen and that marks the end of this conversation
Angelica Celeborn/fl
Well then I'll get back to work [I'm tired of trying to convince her at this point. I'll leave this house soon]
Grace fisher/fl's mother
Yes, yes leave at once
Angelica turned to leave only to have her sisters make spiteful remarks about her
Ariana Celeborn/fl's sister
Why is she so dirty? *gags in disgust*
Celadina Celeborn/fl's sister
Her dress is so out of date *scowl*
Emiliana Celeborn/fl's sister
What's those dark spots on her face... gross
Angelica Celeborn/fl
[If my sisters were sensible people I would actually be bothered their remarks, but fortunately they're all dumb]
Angelica Celeborn/fl
*walk back to the kitchen and continues making breakfast* We keep going "sighs*
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I'm sorry if the book is going too slow
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Comments
Vivian💘💖
A Cinderella with more than 2 sisters?
2025-09-14
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