author i don't have any issue or problem regarding the plotline but still please change the pfp of the character's even if they are good or bad they just. sort of slip out if that she'll please listen to my request ND change it if u have any difficulty finding inspo i can help but please change it . PS: i first thought it wasn't a good story cause u didn't give the exact picture to the character's but still if u can change the pfp it will actually be good if it looks like a Indian theme or person no hate to your work but please reply ☺️ nobody pays attention to my comments 😢
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author i don't have any issue or problem regarding the plotline but still please change the pfp of the character's even if they are good or bad they just. sort of slip out if that she'll please listen to my request ND change it if u have any difficulty finding inspo i can help but please change it .
PS: i first thought it wasn't a good story cause u didn't give the exact picture to the character's but still if u can change the pfp it will actually be good if it looks like a Indian theme or person no hate to your work but please reply ☺️ nobody pays attention to my comments 😢
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