It's going good! But, I would just say that, give some space to separate the scenes. Like, with taehyung and then add some space and then add Jungkook's pov. It gets mixed up. But, overall it's going good! Keep it up!
2025-08-06
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𔘓𓂃🐻𝓐𝓷𝓷𝓪🐰˖ ִֶཐི༏ཋྀ
Hello /Smile/your story is good don't stop writing
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🦋⃟👑 𝕶𝖔𝖔𝖐𝖎𝖊 ~❣️
It's going good! But, I would just say that, give some space to separate the scenes. Like, with taehyung and then add some space and then add Jungkook's pov. It gets mixed up. But, overall it's going good! Keep it up!
2025-08-06
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𔘓𓂃🐻𝓐𝓷𝓷𝓪🐰˖ ִֶཐི༏ཋྀ
Hello /Smile/your story is good don't stop writing
2025-08-07
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🦋⃟👑 𝕶𝖔𝖔𝖐𝖎𝖊 ~❣️
🤡🍃 What the heck you old uncle!!!
2025-08-06
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