author don't take my words wrong. but tell me one thing is this story about only tae. like is it tae centered? because i have only seen tae tae tae and what about their love story? you wrote it like jk is powerful but you didn't give him enough chances to show his power yet. it feels like tae is the only one powerfull and others are useless. and even jk is not seen in this story that much. i am not questioning your writing maybe you have thought about this story going like this but just clear my confusion. i do like this story alot that's why i feel bad when some readers are mocking jk for not doing anything on time.
2025-08-29
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🖤Vincy_im🖤
Tae don't bully anyone... its just whoever provoke him he doesn't leave the person without beating that's what I love about him
2025-08-25
4
🖤Vincy_im🖤
I like his character so much.... jayda bolna nehi bss mardo ghumake ek... that's my character too
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Shavnam Dhiman
author don't take my words wrong. but tell me one thing is this story about only tae. like is it tae centered? because i have only seen tae tae tae and what about their love story? you wrote it like jk is powerful but you didn't give him enough chances to show his power yet. it feels like tae is the only one powerfull and others are useless. and even jk is not seen in this story that much. i am not questioning your writing maybe you have thought about this story going like this but just clear my confusion. i do like this story alot that's why i feel bad when some readers are mocking jk for not doing anything on time.
2025-08-29
1
🖤Vincy_im🖤
Tae don't bully anyone... its just whoever provoke him he doesn't leave the person without beating that's what I love about him
2025-08-25
4
🖤Vincy_im🖤
I like his character so much.... jayda bolna nehi bss mardo ghumake ek... that's my character too
2025-08-25
3