I don't like it the way you write this story I know this is a story and it's all about imagination but it should still make sense you. should also be little realistic and the story is so rushed I don't want to discourage you author but it doesn't make sense
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Taekook
I don't like it the way you write this story I know this is a story and it's all about imagination but it should still make sense you. should also be little realistic and the story is so rushed
I don't want to discourage you author but it doesn't make sense
2025-09-03
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Two sole one body
**not shocked but shocked part 5**
2025-08-17
3
btsnewera.kaytae
shock part 4 *🙂*
2025-07-22
5