Something suspicious but okay

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Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
Let’s go, Elise.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Yes, Doctor.
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
🙂 Try to call me "Father" hmm
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Ye...yes, Father.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
**The word felt strange. Too soft. Too warm. Like something I wasn’t sure I was allowed to say.🙃🙃🙂🙂**
He gently took my backpack. Not because it was heavy— but because he didn’t want me to carry anything alone anymore. I didn’t say anything. I just... smiled. ☺️☺️
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Note: Just imagine Elise is 17 years old.
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[Scene: On the Train | Window Seat]
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
You can rest if you’d like. It’s a long journey.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
I don’t think I can sleep.
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
That’s alright. We don’t have to talk. Just sit. Be still.
The train moved. The station blurred. And just like that— everything changed.
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Elise is chatting with Hedy . Elise and Hedy were given basic phones by Matron as they are eldest in the orphanage. Hedy is two years younger than Elise.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
On the train now 🥲 3 hours and 20 existential crises later... almost there
Hedy (FL
Hedy (FL's orphanage friend)
Wait it’s in a WHOLE OTHER CITY?? girl is this adoption or abduction 😭
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Lol shut up 💀 he's not creepy okay? he’s like... sad and polite basically an emotional loaf of bread
Hedy (FL
Hedy (FL's orphanage friend)
Ok fine but text me when you reach
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
No I will not 😏
Hedy (FL
Hedy (FL's orphanage friend)
Weirdo 😒
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Bye
Hedy (FL
Hedy (FL's orphanage friend)
Bye 👋
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After an hour
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(Elise is trying to text Hedy) Hey hllo
📶 Message Sent.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Signal’s bad in here... typical.
The doctor walks over with two paper cups of tea and a small box in hand.
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
“Tea? And... something else for you.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
“What’s this?”🤔🤔
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
“A phone. Brand new. Yours now.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
“But I already have one—”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
(gently interrupting): “That one’s too old. The sim might not work well in the new city. And it’s... not secure.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(frowning slightly): “Still works fine.”😒
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
(softly, smiling): 😊 “I insist. You’ll thank me later.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(He hands me a sleek black phone. New. Shiny. Fingerprint locked.)
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(reluctantly): “Okay...”
[She powers it on. Only a few numbers are saved: ‘Doctor,’ ‘Clara,’ ‘Clinic.’ No option to add contacts.]
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(trying not to overthink): “This doesn’t have my old number, does it?”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
“No. This one’s registered under my name. Safer.”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
“No spam calls. No drama. Clean start.”
Elise looks down at her old phone, then back at the new one. A quiet part of her feels something wrong. She quickly opens her old phone and types Hedy again—
📶 Message Failed.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
“Huh?”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
(sipping tea): “Don’t worry about the past, Elise. You have a future now. Let the rest fade.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
Okay...
After reaching the station they took a taxi.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭The car stopped in front of a big house. Not mansion-big. But “quiet-rich-person” big. Grey walls. Ivy on the side. Too many windows. And like... 5 locks on the front door. Why does a doctor need that much security?
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"You must be Elise! Welcome, sweetheart." (warm smile, soft eyes behind round glasses) "My name’s Clara. I’m Dr. Maxwell's housekeeper... and nurse, technically." 😊
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭💭She looked like someone who smelled like vanilla and always knew when you were sick. Instant mom-vibes.
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Clara
Clara
"Come in, come in. You must be tired."☺️☺️
Clara
Clara
I’ve made soup. Non-negotiable.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
"...Thanks. I guess I’m not used to people being this... prepared for me."
Clara
Clara
(Soft chuckle) "That’s alright. You’ll get used to it here. We’re quiet, but we care."
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
"Clara take care of her and show Elise her room 😊"
Clara
Clara
Yes doctor 😊
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Elise was exploring the house
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Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭💭The house was clean. Minimal. Soft lights. No photos on the walls. Not even one. Everything looked lived in… But not loved. I dropped my bag in the guest room. Which wasn’t a guest room anymore, apparently. It was mine.
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Dinner time
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Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 yummy 🤤😋
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 well I thought he is doctor so I have to stay on strict diet. But he is not that bad. They even made this delicious food 🤤🤤
Clara
Clara
**watching her admiring the food**
Clara
Clara
**chukling**
Clara
Clara
"No need to wait, little one. Start eating 😊"
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
(Calmly) “Elise. You don't need to be shy. You are my daughter now. Also, I’d like your old phone.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(stiffens): “Why?”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
“You don’t need two. The new one’s better. Trust me.”
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
(reluctantly): “…I guess.”
Maxwell/FL
Maxwell/FL's adopted father
(Soft smile): “I’ll keep it safe. Don’t worry.
Clara
Clara
Go on Elise. Start eating
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
okay 😊😊
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 something is really wierd.
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 umm. But okay. I have read that fathers are overprotective towards daughters
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 Maybe he is also
Elise/FL
Elise/FL
💭 Whatever let's enjoy this yummy food 😋😋
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