EPISODE 1
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Hii eveyone this is my first bl cs
Su mian was
siting on chair make-up artist doing makeup
[Door opens. Footsteps echo. A cold presence enters.]
mei jing (mc mother)
(gently)
"Su Mian."
su mian (mc )
(quickly turning)
"M-Mom?" (nervous)
mei jing (mc mother)
(gently)
"from today Whatever Shi Zichen says ... you do it." child.
mei jing (mc mother)
(dangerous tone, tightly holding su mian hand ) : "And don’t you dare tell him anything
su mian (mc )
(scared )
"...I remember everything."
nods quickly nervously
mei jing (mc mother)
(fixing his collar, whispering)
"Good boy."
She pats his head with a cold smile.
su mian (mc )
(walking in quietly, eyes wide, whispering to himself)
"So few people... It’s my first time at such a grand place..."
[Guests whispering, glaring with disgusting eyes .]
su mian (mc )
(confused )
"...Why... are they looking at me like that?"
su cheng ( mc father)
(expression stiff, gripping Su Mian’s wrist tightly)
"Come. Don’t embarrass the family."
su mian (mc )
(flinching, nodding silently)
"...Yes, Father."
He’s led to the stage. The lights burn. The world feels heavy
Shi Zichen.
Cold. Elegant. Deadly.
His eyes fall on Su Mian.
priest
"You may now exchange rings."
[Shi Zichen calmly but tightly takes Su Mian’s hand.]
su mian (mc )
(stiffens slightly, fingers trembling)
"...H-his hands are cold..."
looks up at Shi Zichen innocently, but Zichen doesn’t meet his eyes.
"You may now seal your vows."
The crowd remains cold and silent. No one claps. No cheers. Just stares.
[Su Mian shakily picks up Zichen’s ring. He looks at it carefully.]
Everyone begins to leave. The whispers return. Su Mian doesn’t hear them anymore. He’s staring at his own hand.
su mian (mc )
(in his thoughts, happy like child):
"This ring... it's beautiful..."
"I’ve never worn anything so... clean, so expensive."
"Is this... really mine?"
He turns slightly to look at Shi Zichen, who is already walking off the stage without waiting.
su mian (mc )
(standing alone, blinking as he sees Shi Zichen walking ahead silently)
“…He’s going… Should I… follow him?”
su mian (mc )
(thinking, tilting his head)
"No one told me what to do now... Is the wedding over? Do I go back home?"
chi sheng (ml assistant)
(cold voice, looking down at Su Mian with narrowed eyes)
"Follow me."
su mian (mc )
(startled, stepping back a little)
"...Ah—"
chi sheng (ml assistant)
(tone colder, eyes filled with disgust)
"Don’t make me repeat myself. President Shi doesn’t like delays."
su mian (mc )
(innocently blinks, voice soft)
"...O-okay..."
nods obediently
He quietly follows behind Chi Meng, keeping distance like a nervous child walking behind a strict teacher.
Chi Meng opens the door without saying a word. Shi Zichen sits inside, head turned away, on a call. Cold. Untouchable.
(quietly gets in, sitting at the edge of the seat)
His legs are close together, eyes down, like a child waiting to be scolded.
The engine hums. The car moves smoothly through the city roads. Inside, silence wraps the air like ice.
Shi Zichen – sitting with one leg crossed, gaze outside, expression blank. He hasn't said a single word.
Su Mian – quietly sitting near the window, hands in his lap.
He doesn't look at Zichen. Instead, his eyes are wide, staring at the passing lights, buildings, and glowing streets.
su mian (mc )
(In mind ): "So many lights…"
"Everything is glowing… is this what outside looks like at night?"
su mian (mc )
(his face gently presses against the glass)
"The cars, the roads… even the trees look shiny…"
"I’ve never been outside the city at night before..."
The car passes a lake lit with floating lanterns. Su Mian’s eyes sparkle for a moment.
su mian (mc )
(thinking)
"I wonder if we’ll pass a park..."
"I always wanted to see those places from the books."
Comments
chimo✨
you are lying authi 😭.... you said it's your first time and it's still this good 🤌... I have no words ✨
2025-06-28
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