Author as ur old reader I just wanna advice u to focus more on emotions.... I just love ur stories but it lacks that deep emotional connections... feels a bit casual like yeah its happening just happening... just a lil bit advice not criticizing...
2025-07-21
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Taekook♡believer🌈
yeah so what!? didn't you ignore him first 🙄
2025-07-21
17
taekoo
it clearly shows you never care for him since you never noticed him when he was hurt 🙂
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🖤Vincy_im🖤
Author as ur old reader I just wanna advice u to focus more on emotions.... I just love ur stories but it lacks that deep emotional connections... feels a bit casual like yeah its happening just happening... just a lil bit advice not criticizing...
2025-07-21
7
Taekook♡believer🌈
yeah so what!? didn't you ignore him first 🙄
2025-07-21
17
taekoo
it clearly shows you never care for him since you never noticed him when he was hurt 🙂
2025-07-21
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