Writer needs to do better with their descriptive adjectives. What are “jade legs”’? Who describes a man as having a “delicate little face”? And what’s all of this “brother 1”, “brother 2” stuff? Just give the characters names or is the way of writing in countries not in USA?
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SG1* Mermaid
Writer needs to do better with their descriptive adjectives. What are “jade legs”’? Who describes a man as having a “delicate little face”? And what’s all of this “brother 1”, “brother 2” stuff? Just give the characters names or is the way of writing in countries not in USA?
2025-06-29
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James Kirkwood
Jade legs ? Are they green??
2025-07-10
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Nadena Spurgeon Underwood
ok
2025-07-08
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