That coma plot doesn't really work, so let's recreate the story
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In dark night, a car was going slowly. The winds were cold yet slow. It seemed that it was about to rain soon.
There were sounds of giggles coming from the car...
Priyanshi
Honey, Careful. See a truck is coming..!
She said, while smiling and the man looked at the truck.
Vansh
*Frowns slightly*
The truck was coming with full speed. Before he could think of anything-
CLASH
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Everything seemed blank, no sound was reaching his eyes. He could feel the pain in his body.
The blood was oozing out of his head, beside him.. His wife was there on the road. She was instantly unconscious. He wanted to reach out to her, but he could not.
He wanted to see her properly but his vision was blur.
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Police rushes to the site and quickly sents both the man and woman to the hospital. None of them were concious at the moment.
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