The story is nice ... It's quite different from some stereotypical stories... but here are some of my suggestions 1) Make the pf pic of characters more beautiful. 2)Your writing style is great but add some pictures in between. 3) Keep writing. 💜💜💜💜💜💜
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Zahra Kazmi
The story is nice ... It's quite different from some stereotypical stories... but here are some of my suggestions
1) Make the pf pic of characters more beautiful.
2)Your writing style is great but add some pictures in between.
3) Keep writing.
💜💜💜💜💜💜
2025-06-06
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