Author, I’m your old reader and I’ve read almost all of your stories, so I’m just giving you my honest advice.
You always start the story really well, but the endings often feel a little rushed—just like in this book and also in your previous one, “Only I Can Make Him Cry.”
But you know, endings matter even more than the beginning. They’re what stay in the reader’s heart and mind forever. So please, try to give more time and depth to the ending—it will make your stories unforgettable. 💜
2025-08-22
0
Luna
Ending was quite disappointed.
The story line was worth appreciation but I don't know author was so rushed in the ending. Like seriously everyone died!!!!🥺
JK was a villain. What about a villain's supremacy, his aura or his legacy.😒
Don't wanna be rude but author shi were you drunk while writing it😭😭
2025-08-31
1
lovetaekook145😍
it's always too good to read i don't know why the reason is but i don't like top tae storys, sorry, not all storys i only read very some, but i love tk read top kook storys plzzzz write top kook only plzzzzz
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Ƭαʟҽs вy Vɾιтιкα 🌸✨
Author, I’m your old reader and I’ve read almost all of your stories, so I’m just giving you my honest advice.
You always start the story really well, but the endings often feel a little rushed—just like in this book and also in your previous one, “Only I Can Make Him Cry.”
But you know, endings matter even more than the beginning. They’re what stay in the reader’s heart and mind forever. So please, try to give more time and depth to the ending—it will make your stories unforgettable. 💜
2025-08-22
0
Luna
Ending was quite disappointed.
The story line was worth appreciation but I don't know author was so rushed in the ending. Like seriously everyone died!!!!🥺
JK was a villain. What about a villain's supremacy, his aura or his legacy.😒
Don't wanna be rude but author shi were you drunk while writing it😭😭
2025-08-31
1
lovetaekook145😍
it's always too good to read i don't know why the reason is but i don't like top tae storys, sorry, not all storys i only read very some, but i love tk read top kook storys plzzzz write top kook only plzzzzz
2025-08-03
2