This kinda giving vibe of South Indian movie - Time Story ...
2025-08-04
8
NaYaGarApHoPho
oh gosh I was so invested in this story, I liked it so much but this ending? do you think it's a happy ending??? Jungkook wasn't even the ml he was a villain then why did he end up with that fl? wtf?! and did he forget tae so easily? this was his love for Tae ewww then I don't think he should be with Tae...... I thought that when everyone was dying Jungkook will die too and they'll meet in real world to start their story again.... the whole story got ruined I'm sorry, the story was really good but this shitty ending...
2025-08-22
2
Ƭαʟҽs вy Vɾιтιкα 🌸✨
Author, I’m your old reader and I’ve read almost all of your stories, so I’m just giving you my honest advice.
You always start the story really well, but the endings often feel a little rushed—just like in this book and also in your previous one, “Only I Can Make Him Cry.”
But you know, endings matter even more than the beginning. They’re what stay in the reader’s heart and mind forever. So please, try to give more time and depth to the ending—it will make your stories unforgettable. 💜
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This kinda giving vibe of South Indian movie - Time Story ...
2025-08-04
8
NaYaGarApHoPho
oh gosh I was so invested in this story, I liked it so much but this ending? do you think it's a happy ending??? Jungkook wasn't even the ml he was a villain then why did he end up with that fl? wtf?! and did he forget tae so easily? this was his love for Tae ewww then I don't think he should be with Tae...... I thought that when everyone was dying Jungkook will die too and they'll meet in real world to start their story again.... the whole story got ruined I'm sorry, the story was really good but this shitty ending...
2025-08-22
2
Ƭαʟҽs вy Vɾιтιкα 🌸✨
Author, I’m your old reader and I’ve read almost all of your stories, so I’m just giving you my honest advice.
You always start the story really well, but the endings often feel a little rushed—just like in this book and also in your previous one, “Only I Can Make Him Cry.”
But you know, endings matter even more than the beginning. They’re what stay in the reader’s heart and mind forever. So please, try to give more time and depth to the ending—it will make your stories unforgettable. 💜
2025-08-22
0