If someone has a problem with your way of writing (except for grammatical mistakes), I honestly think they should just switch to another chat story. I don’t find anything wrong with how you write. Yes, this is a chat story, but that doesn’t mean you can’t add detail or express emotions beautifully. And about you praising Taehyung’s beauty — well, who wouldn’t? It’s not like you’re writing the same line over and over again. Describing him in your own way just adds to the charm.
Also, I’ll admit there were maybe one or two chapters that felt a little slow, but out of 120, that’s nothing. It never felt like I was reading a full-blown novel — I’ve always been able to follow and enjoy the story just fine. In fact, I want to be a little selfish and ask you to give us multiple updates every day 🥲
2025-07-08
5
Tae tae
I waited too long just to hear this.... I'm heartbroken. your story is in my top list... I wish you update 5 updates each day 😁..I think you got your answer (ignore my grammatical mistakes)
2025-07-08
5
ladybug Catnior
no way don't you dare change anything and those that don't appreciate your story then don't bother with them cus I wait literally everyday for you to update and it's one of my fav chat story too ❤️❤️❣️😁😁
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i_stole_jimin's_jams😎
If someone has a problem with your way of writing (except for grammatical mistakes), I honestly think they should just switch to another chat story. I don’t find anything wrong with how you write. Yes, this is a chat story, but that doesn’t mean you can’t add detail or express emotions beautifully. And about you praising Taehyung’s beauty — well, who wouldn’t? It’s not like you’re writing the same line over and over again. Describing him in your own way just adds to the charm.
Also, I’ll admit there were maybe one or two chapters that felt a little slow, but out of 120, that’s nothing. It never felt like I was reading a full-blown novel — I’ve always been able to follow and enjoy the story just fine.
In fact, I want to be a little selfish and ask you to give us multiple updates every day 🥲
2025-07-08
5
Tae tae
I waited too long just to hear this.... I'm heartbroken. your story is in my top list... I wish you update 5 updates each day 😁..I think you got your answer (ignore my grammatical mistakes)
2025-07-08
5
ladybug Catnior
no way don't you dare change anything and those that don't appreciate your story then don't bother with them cus I wait literally everyday for you to update and it's one of my fav chat story too ❤️❤️❣️😁😁
2025-07-08
3