well author it's true that MC like this are irritating but reader comment your story and you got there idea and that how a person improve and make progress.... not take those words on heart , you story is good but there are some rooms to improve.... no one perfect and same as you .... not take those words on heart , you story is going well ❤️
2025-05-30
2
𝙺𝚊𝚜𝚑𝚒𝚜𝚑_𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚎𝚜_
author listen plss ignore the ones who are telling you to delete the story... yes here I can also see the male is totally jerk and idiot but plss make him regret in future but don't just delete your story you know you are growing author right now so obviously some useless shit is gonna come and say many things just ignore them.. 🤭like I ignore the barking dogs...
2025-06-01
1
__千Ã𝐝เ𝕟𝔤 卄𝑜pe__ 🖤~
author can you read my story , and comment also ..... if you want /Rose/
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__千Ã𝐝เ𝕟𝔤 卄𝑜pe__ 🖤~
well author it's true that MC like this are irritating but reader comment your story and you got there idea and that how a person improve and make progress.... not take those words on heart , you story is good but there are some rooms to improve.... no one perfect and same as you .... not take those words on heart , you story is going well ❤️
2025-05-30
2
𝙺𝚊𝚜𝚑𝚒𝚜𝚑_𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚎𝚜_
author listen plss ignore the ones who are telling you to delete the story... yes here I can also see the male is totally jerk and idiot but plss make him regret in future but don't just delete your story you know you are growing author right now so obviously some useless shit is gonna come and say many things just ignore them.. 🤭like I ignore the barking dogs...
2025-06-01
1
__千Ã𝐝เ𝕟𝔤 卄𝑜pe__ 🖤~
author can you read my story , and comment also ..... if you want /Rose/
2025-05-30
1