your story concept is nice but you lack lots of things your chapters are too small like in 1 scroll episode finish irregular updates and it don't give excitement like in 1 chapter only 1 person talk 1 line and chapter finish
that's why don't want to like chapters give votes and gifts
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your story concept is nice but you lack lots of things your chapters are too small like in 1 scroll episode finish irregular updates and it don't give excitement like in 1 chapter only 1 person talk 1 line and chapter finish
that's why don't want to like chapters give votes and gifts
2025-07-18
4
harshreet
broooo
that's toooo shortttt😭😭
2025-07-18
1