Hey! Don’t be too hard on yourself writing takes courage, and putting effort into your story already says so much about your dedication. Every writer starts somewhere, and improvement comes with time and passion. You absolutely deserve appreciation, and I can see you care a lot about your readers. Keep going, you're doing great!
2025-04-26
4
MARIE GRACE
no offense but it's inappropriate for ml to fix fl hook because he is engaged with her sister, and fl like - oh my heart, like seriously girl have some self respect once he didn't trust you if something happens like this again he will again won't trust on you i don't know why she is so dumb
2025-06-24
0
Cinderella ❤
the story is good,but somewhat I am disappointed with the fl as She is a weak fragile person who forgive the sister who snatched her family and love fo a decade and the ml is not deserving her rather than trusting her ,he chose her sister
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Sadiya
Hey! Don’t be too hard on yourself writing takes courage, and putting effort into your story already says so much about your dedication. Every writer starts somewhere, and improvement comes with time and passion. You absolutely deserve appreciation, and I can see you care a lot about your readers. Keep going, you're doing great!
2025-04-26
4
MARIE GRACE
no offense but it's inappropriate for ml to fix fl hook because he is engaged with her sister, and fl like - oh my heart, like seriously girl have some self respect once he didn't trust you if something happens like this again he will again won't trust on you i don't know why she is so dumb
2025-06-24
0
Cinderella ❤
the story is good,but somewhat I am disappointed with the fl as She is a weak fragile person who forgive the sister who snatched her family and love fo a decade and the ml is not deserving her rather than trusting her ,he chose her sister
2025-04-26
3