i like how you write this however it somehow feel like the emotions are not expressed accurately,umm the use of punctuation marks,one time there wss this mark(!) but it says he said it calmly,but its great words are easy to understand.hope this will help you write better,goodluck!😘😘
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tia
i like how you write this however it somehow feel like the emotions are not expressed accurately,umm the use of punctuation marks,one time there wss this mark(!) but it says he said it calmly,but its great words are easy to understand.hope this will help you write better,goodluck!😘😘
2022-04-11
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Sneha
good
2022-02-03
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emma
support
2022-01-18
0