Hate is different and punishing for wrong is different.... Taehyung obviously did wrong by killing JK.... but have you shown the regret of Taehyung yet....??? did you show readers his suffering for what wrong he did..... he is again here pretending that he is right..... if we punish someone that doesn't mean we hate someone..... it's just if someone is doing wrong then they should held the consequences of that...... the way Taehyung behaving in this situation is like he hasn't done anything wrong and is getting back easily with Jungkook...... The very real concept about love "LOVE HAS NO MEANING IF IT DOESN'T COME WITH TRUST" and you showed in season 1 that at the end Taehyung didn't trust Jungkook..... so this season should be to change that Taehyung.... I hope you are getting my point... as a writer now you can think what has to he done
2025-05-23
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Smriti
your plot is good. but you know sometimes we need to extend story to give the story a beautiful ending. according to your plot season 2 will be a revenge story of jk. but until now what we see tae is always right. what ever he do and jk is the one who cannot stand for Himself. in season 1 jk's character war really strong. so you a take your time refresh to your mind then again start to right i hope you will find what reader wants to read.
take care of yourself
2025-05-23
1
Elsa..priya💓
Right author.... there is also Jungkook fault even after he possessed but in tae eyes he did it and tae didn't know about jk was possessed that time ..... so continue the story like you want ☺
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Hate is different and punishing for wrong is different.... Taehyung obviously did wrong by killing JK.... but have you shown the regret of Taehyung yet....??? did you show readers his suffering for what wrong he did..... he is again here pretending that he is right..... if we punish someone that doesn't mean we hate someone..... it's just if someone is doing wrong then they should held the consequences of that...... the way Taehyung behaving in this situation is like he hasn't done anything wrong and is getting back easily with Jungkook...... The very real concept about love "LOVE HAS NO MEANING IF IT DOESN'T COME WITH TRUST" and you showed in season 1 that at the end Taehyung didn't trust Jungkook..... so this season should be to change that Taehyung.... I hope you are getting my point... as a writer now you can think what has to he done
2025-05-23
1
Smriti
your plot is good. but you know sometimes we need to extend story to give the story a beautiful ending. according to your plot season 2 will be a revenge story of jk. but until now what we see tae is always right. what ever he do and jk is the one who cannot stand for Himself. in season 1 jk's character war really strong. so you a take your time refresh to your mind then again start to right i hope you will find what reader wants to read.
take care of yourself
2025-05-23
1
Elsa..priya💓
Right author.... there is also Jungkook fault even after he possessed but in tae eyes he did it and tae didn't know about jk was possessed that time ..... so continue the story like you want ☺
2025-05-23
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