Reborn: To Correct The Mistake's.
Episode - 4
Nancy
"Hey Jimin! 👋🏻"
Nancy called out cheerfully, her eyes twinkling with excitement.
Nancy
"Where’s our birthday boy?"
she asked, scanning the crowd.
Park Jimin
"Hey Nancy! 👋🏻"
replied with a soft smile.
Park Jimin
"He’s at the poolside area,"
he added casually.
Nancy
Nancy raised a brow.
"What’s he doing there?"
Park Jimin
Jimin scratched the back of his head.
"A while ago, a maid came and said someone was calling him. 🙄
Park Jimin
So he went to meet that person. I don’t know if it was a he or she. 😐"
Nancy
"Oh… okay,"
Nancy nodded slowly, her cheerful tone fading.
Park Jimin
"But why is he taking so long? 😑
Do you think he’s alright? Or… did something happen to him?"
Nancy
"Don’t worry, Jimin. He’ll be fine. 🙂"
(But honestly… even I have a weird feeling about this. 😑)
Park Jimin
Jimin bit his lip anxiously.
"I think we should go check on him."
Nancy
Nodded.
"Yeah… let’s go. 😟"
The music faded behind them as both rushed toward the poolside, unaware that something dark might already be waiting there…
author(Anna)..
Introduction time..🤠
Nancy
Hi, I'm Nancy! 👋🏻
I’m currently studying Business, and honestly… it’s been quite the journey! 📚✨
But the best part?
That class gave me two of my closest and most real friends — Taehyung and Jimin. 😁💖
They’re not just classmates anymore, they’re my people. 💫
author(Anna)..
Now... let’s see what’s really happening behind the scenes. 👀
At the poolside area...
🌙 The soft glow of lights shimmered over the water, but the place felt oddly quiet.
Park Jimin
(looking around nervously):
“Where is Taehyung? He told me he’d be here…”
Nancy
(frowning slightly):
“Yeah… then why can’t we see him?”
Park Jimin
(voice low, a bit worried):
“I don’t know. This doesn't feel right…”
Nancy
(taking a step forward, her voice trembling slightly):
“Let’s look for him. He wouldn’t just disappear like that.”
Park Jimin
(nodding):
“Yeah. Come on.”
They both start walking quickly, eyes scanning every corner.
Nancy
(calling out, her voice echoing softly):
“Taehyung? Are you here?”
Park Jimin
(his brows furrowed, voice louder now):
“Tae?! Where are you, man?”
Silence. Just the faint rustle of leaves and the sound of water gently lapping against the tiles.
Nancy
(anxiously):
“Why isn’t he answering? Jimin… something’s wrong.”
Park Jimin
(jaw tightening):
“Let’s keep looking. He has to be here somewhere.”
Kim Taehyung.
(smiling, waving casually):
“Hey Jimin ☺️
I’m here.”
Nancy
(confused, scanning the area):
“Tae?”
Park Jimin
(frowning, looking around):
“Tae…?”
Kim Taehyung.
(walking toward them, chuckling softly):
“Why are you guys making noise?”
“I’m literally standing right in front of you. 😏”
Kim Taehyung.
He tilts his head, playfully:
“Are you blind or what?”
“Can’t you see me?”
Nancy suddenly points behind him, her eyes wide with panic.
Nancy
(voice shaky):
“Jimin… Tae… 👉🏻”
Park Jimin
(staggering back a step, breath catching):
“T-TAE!”
Kim Taehyung.
(raising an eyebrow, confused):
“Finally you saw me! But why are you yelling like I’m a zombie or something?!” 😡
But… no answer.
They don’t even look at him.
They just… walk right through him.
Like he’s air.
Like he doesn’t exist.
Like he’s…
Kim Taehyung.
(staring in disbelief, voice dropping):
“How can they… cross through my body…?” 😳
“What the f—”
His sentence cuts off as he follows their gaze.
He slowly turns—
And there, floating lifeless in the pool…
was him.
His body.
His own face, pale and still beneath the surface.
Kim Taehyung.
(gasping, stumbling back):
“No…
No, no, no—what is this?
That can’t be me—! 😳”
His knees weaken, but he doesn’t fall.
Because he’s not even standing.
He’s just… hovering.
Weightless.
Untouchable.
Park Jimin
(rushing to the edge, panic rising):
“Nancy! Call someone! Anyone—go! GO! 🥺”
Nancy
(frozen for a moment, trembling):
“Y-Yeah… I’m going! I’ll call them! 🥺”
She turns and runs, screaming through the backyard, her voice shrill with fear.
Nancy
(yelling):
“HELP!! SOMEONE COME QUICK!! PLEASE!! IT’S TAEHYUNG!!”
After that…
Taehyung’s lifeless body was pulled out of the water.
The blue of the pool now looked colder, still, eerily quiet.
But it was too late.
Too late to save him.
Too late to wake him.
The music had stopped.
The laughter faded into stunned silence.
The once bright party lights now flickered like dying hope.
Everyone who had just seen him smiling… dancing… laughing…
…stood frozen in disbelief.
They couldn’t understand —
How could someone so alive be gone just like that?
Everyone
“He was just here…”
Everyone
“No… it can’t be…”
“Taehyung? That Taehyung?”
He was the kind of boy who bowed with respect.
The one who helped the catering staff when they dropped plates.
The one who remembered birthdays that others forgot.
The boy with a heart too big for his chest. 🥺
Everyone loved him.
Because he loved everyone.
His Mom drops beside his body, holding his cold hand with trembling fingers
Kim Hana (mother)
“How could he leave his mom like this?” 😭😭😭
Kim Hana (mother)
“Today… Today was his birthday. This is just a prank, right Tae? Right?”
Kim Hana (mother)
“Please… please wake up… Taehyung, open your eyes. Please, for mom…” 😭
Mr. Kim's (his Dad) voice breaking, but trying to hold his wife close
Kim Arthur (father)
“Don’t cry, Hana… please…” 😢
But his own tears fall as he whispers under his breath,
Kim Arthur (father)
(“Why, son? Why would you do this? Don’t you know how much we love you? We would've done anything for you… how could you leave us like this?”)
Kim Arthur (father)
“This pain… it’s unbearable.” 😭😭😭
Namjoon – standing behind them, frozen
His face pale, his heart shattered.
Kim Namjoon
“God… why him?” 😔
Kim Namjoon
“He never hurt anyone… he didn’t deserve this.”
“He was the purest soul I knew.” 😢
He gently places a hand on his father’s shoulder, swallowing his own grief.
Kim Namjoon
“Dad… we have to stay strong.” 🥺
“You have to take care of Mom… she needs you. We both do.” 😢💔
Kim Arthur (father)
Finally breaks down, shaking his head
“I know… but I can’t, Joon. I just can’t… not without him…” 😭😭😭😭
Lily – voice trembling, hands pressed to her mouth
She drops beside Taehyung’s still form, tears streaming down her cheeks.
Kim lily
“Tae… how could you leave us?” 😞😢
“Noona can’t live without you… you promised we’d grow old together, remember?”
Kim lily
“Please, Tae… please come back…” 😭😭
“I need you. We all do.” 💔
On the other side of the yard…
Jimin – curled up on the grass, knees pulled to his chest, sobbing uncontrollably 😭😭😭😭
Park Jimin
“Tae… I told you not to go there…” 😭
Park Jimin
“You said you’d come back first. You promised me, idiot… why didn’t you come back?”
Park Jimin
“Where are you now? I’m still waiting… Tae, answer me…” 😢💔
Jimin’s Dad – kneels beside him, pulling him into a hug
Park Seo-Joon.
“Jimin… baby, don’t cry… please…” 😢
Park Jimin
Looking up with red eyes, broken
“He told me he’d be back… he told me, Appa… why isn’t he coming?” 😭😭🥺
Park Min-young.
Covering her face, sobbing silently
“I can’t watch my baby break like this…”
“God… why? Why Taehyung? He was just a boy… he was kind. He was light. Why him?” 😢
Nancy – standing quietly, face soaked in tears
She doesn’t say much. She can’t.
But her sobs say everything her lips cannot. 😭
Jimin’s Mom – gently wraps her arms around her
Park Min-young.
“Nancy, sweetheart… I know. I know it hurts.” 🥺
Park Min-young.
“Let it out, don’t hold it in…” 😢
Nancy
"But aunty T-Tae.."😢😭
Nancy clings to her like a child, her cries echoing in the night sky…
as the party becomes a memorial…
and the night turns into mourning.
Now the news had spread like wildfire—
Kim Arthur’s only son, Kim Taehyung, was dead.
And the world felt… wrong.
Too quiet. Too heavy.
Like the wind itself had paused in mourning.
Everyone believed it was an accident.
A tragic drowning.
A boy who had smiled just moments before now lay cold and still—
gone.
✨ Somewhere between the realms of the living and the dead… ✨
Taehyung stood frozen, watching everything unravel.
His eyes wide, lips trembling, heart aching though it had stopped beating.
Kim Taehyung.
(voice cracking)
“Why, God…? Why am I still here… if I’m already dead…?”
Tears welled up in his eyes as he looked around, seeing the shattered faces of the people he loved most.
Kim Taehyung.
“Why are you showing me this?”
His voice barely a whisper.
“Everyone’s crying because of me. I… I can’t take this. I can’t…” 😭
He reached out instinctively toward them—but his hands went right through.
Kim Taehyung.
“No… No, please… Mom… Dad… Noona… Jimin-ah… Hyung… Nancy…” 🥺💔
Their cries stabbed at his soul.
His mother collapsed to her knees again, screaming into the void.
author(Anna)..
Hey guys 👋🏻
author(Anna)..
This chapter was full of heartbreak, I know…
But sometimes, endings are just the beginning.
Do you think Taehyung’s death was really an accident? Or is there more hidden beneath the surface?
author(Anna)..
If you’re as emotional and curious as I am right now —
author(Anna)..
Drop your thoughts in the comments!
I'd love to hear what you felt reading this part. 💌
author(Anna)..
Let’s cry together... and maybe hope together too. 😢✨
author(Anna)..
Thank you for reading. Your support means the world! 🥰
author(Anna)..
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Park Jimin
Hey aren't you gone ?
author(Anna)..
yeah yeah I'm going 😐
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