I'm not being offensive here but if you make your sentences a little long it would be nice it's short so it makes readers a little bored but other than that it's really good
2021-05-07
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hana
you have a lots of grammatical errors which makes the reading difficult. please fix it.
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Army 💜BTS💜
I'm not being offensive here
but if you make your sentences a little long
it would be nice
it's short so it makes readers a little bored
but other than that
it's really good
2021-05-07
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hana
you have a lots of grammatical errors which makes the reading difficult. please fix it.
2021-03-18
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Miss crazy
good🥰🥰
2020-09-02
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