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Major Atul ranawat
(enters in room)
Gautam Chattopadhyay
(enter behind major)
Mandar Patil(ML)
Sir(salute)
When major enters room everyone went silent and salute him giving him the respect he deserves .
Major Atul Ranawat ...
Middle age person
Strict and disciplined
Loves nation
Cold and scary
Has goes on lot operation in border and battled with strength and power
Always putting himself first in serious situation in order to have scar on his first before his nation, dignified man
A great leader and the commandos and captain and every soldier in the military respect him a alot
but Also have one personality 😆He always wanted daughter but got a son so whenever he sees girls like aarna and ruhi he becomes a pookie for them ....and sees them as his daughter
Major Atul ranawat
So how's the report I told you to do mandar❄️
Mandar Patil(ML)
Yes sir , actually there are many serious problem we have encountered while doing this research ❄️,(putting report forward)
Major Atul ranawat
What do you mean 🧐
Mandar Patil(ML)
Someone is keeping an eye on us ,our every movement is being observed ❄️
Aarna Trivedi(FL)
But the main problem was poisoning in food right❄️
Major Atul ranawat
👀🧐you are miss Aarna right
Major Atul ranawat
😆finally I meet you,that parthsarthy was right ,you are soo cute and beautiful like daughter
Aarna Trivedi(FL)
😳Th..thank you
sanskar(ml bff)
Is this really our major👀
Gautam Chattopadhyay
Ahem mr ranawat(whispers)don't loose your posture here
Major Atul ranawat
😐so you are right miss aarna ,that information about poisoning is half true ,actual reason is to execute the terrorism and there helper in our country (wanted to say in cold voice but said in simple and normal voice)
ved (ML bff)
Bhai bhabhi ko ghurna band kar ☺️(TRANSLATION: Bro don't look at sister in law so intensely)
Mandar Patil(ML)
👊(punched him under table)
ved (ML bff)
Cough cough(auuu what the heck he eat ,that punch is so hard)
Ruhi(FL BFF)
(pour water in glass and gave him)☺️
ved (ML bff)
😳thank you(another cutie 😊)
sanskar(ml bff)
😭I also want someone who will give me water
Mr.swasthi
👀now what happened to him
Major was talking to aarna non stop without giving a fuck about people around him
And here Aarna was continuously gazing Mandar time to time
Aarna Trivedi(FL)
(He is my crush now💓)
Mandar Patil(ML)
Ahem so sir I think we should do inspection first about food ,I think really there is a problem continuously sickness and fever of soldiers is not justified
Major Atul ranawat
Hmm mr Gautam what do you think
Gautam Chattopadhyay
Sir I think we should do as mandar says but there a problem ,sudden inspection may alert the enemy we should make it confidential ❄️
Major Atul ranawat
Ok so do as mandar says and make it confidential,don't alert the enemy ❄️and miss aarna😊and miss ruhi you guys do research about poisoning quietly these three commando will be at your service ok😍
Aarna Trivedi(FL)
Yes sir😊
Major Atul ranawat
😍💘such a cute daughters
Gautam Chattopadhyay
Ahem sir we should go
Major Atul ranawat
Hmm ☹️yes ,the meeting is dismissed ❄️
Everyone was going to their respective work but the two person were in the meeting room
Aarna was curiously looking at mandar like she was seeing something interesting......
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