at all your story is very good but I want to suggest you something please don't use emojis, looks very funny, make conversation is very funny, create a emotion with word not emojis, like he is crying heavily or breathing heavily, so if you can just don't use this emoji, making the story is very funny, for creative really emotional scenes please use a sensible word don't emojis
2025-07-06
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drak_loyalty✧
oh it's mafia base not maria right??or did i forget any character??
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mysterious girl 😏
at all your story is very good but I want to suggest you something please don't use emojis, looks very funny, make conversation is very funny, create a emotion with word not emojis, like he is crying heavily or breathing heavily, so if you can just don't use this emoji, making the story is very funny, for creative really emotional scenes please use a sensible word don't emojis
2025-07-06
1
drak_loyalty✧
oh it's mafia base not maria right??or did i forget any character??
2025-07-05
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Taekook_soul🐯🐰
update more authyy can't wait for next
2025-07-05
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