yes this is not satisfied and there is something not clear the f****** grandfather talking about revenge what revenge I cannot understand about this thing,
and that mother f***** grandfather why he was alive she should die
at all you have to be more mature with your stories
don't give Happy ending their cural villain
otherwise the story was nice I enjoyed but please don't show Mercy any villain in your story kill them or make their life is very painful until they die that was the satisfying thing I can say
please do understood what I am saying I am really disappoin with descending really really disappoint that mother f***** should die die die die 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😑😑😑
2025-03-07
1
jah_rak_
aghhg..... it's the end , and i still remember the time when I first started reading chapter 1 ❤️😗 i really loved it :) . but if u going to write new story then u should write about their past ig.... starting from Becker and Kainy
2025-02-06
1
Darkness
Can you write about their grandparents then biskki story..... I mean why they had so many misunderstandings........ 🥺
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mysterious girl 😏
yes this is not satisfied and there is something not clear the f****** grandfather talking about revenge what revenge I cannot understand about this thing,
and that mother f***** grandfather why he was alive she should die
at all you have to be more mature with your stories
don't give Happy ending their cural villain
otherwise the story was nice I enjoyed but please don't show Mercy any villain in your story kill them or make their life is very painful until they die that was the satisfying thing I can say
please do understood what I am saying I am really disappoin with descending really really disappoint that mother f***** should die die die die 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😑😑😑
2025-03-07
1
jah_rak_
aghhg..... it's the end , and i still remember the time when I first started reading chapter 1 ❤️😗 i really loved it :) . but if u going to write new story then u should write about their past ig.... starting from Becker and Kainy
2025-02-06
1
Darkness
Can you write about their grandparents then biskki story..... I mean why they had so many misunderstandings........ 🥺
2025-02-05
2