Whispers of the Siren introduction

Hey guys, this is my first time writing the story... (like every first timer) I just want to request y'all to highlight my mistakes...

So, I really tried hard to find the best pictures of my characters ... But I couldn't find it, I want beautiful images for my characters, help me If you can, I'm not perfect in English, I left my education, it's been a while since I've written something lol so please highlight the mistakes, if you can...

So, right now... in this chapter, I'm going to start the intro...

And obviously it's bl 😺👌

Dante black

he's the richest man, one of the great passions of his to discover about the mythical creatures... he still couldn't find one.. He's very merciless towards marine animals...he has a collection of thousands of marine animals... He's obsessed with finding something new to add to his collection, everyone is scared of Dante... Dante Black has a tall muscular body, with rough skin from continuously being at sea. He has bright golden eyes and black hair tied back. He wears sailor clothes, but his gear looks expensive, making him seem powerful.

It was night, and the sailors were chatting, while Dante sat alone with a cold look on his face, watching the sailors. The waves were strong, hitting the ship's surface, making the night even more mysterious.. The moon was glowing faintly and the stars were twinkling...

sailor 1

"Woah... this view is giving me goosebumps," said one of the men, who felt a shiver down his spine. Dante, on the other hand scoffed by hearing his words... Coldly looking at the ocean.

sailor 2

"Shut up, man... We're sailors, not scared little kids," the man said, giving the other a playful pat as he saw him getting scared.

victor

"Sir... I think we've lost our way. We have no idea where we are." For Dante, Victor was the most loyal person...more than anyone else...

all the sailors were frightened, they never saw the place like this... Suddenly... They heard a beautiful song echoing across the ocean. Leaving all the sailors amazing

They saw something strange sitting on the rock. The creature's whispers were enchanting, sounding like a beautiful melody... They couldn't see it clearly... It had the blue eyes... which were gleaming in the night, made everyone amazed and frightened at the same time

Dante black

"Set the ship towards it. We're going that way.'" Dante said, looking at the creature in a cold tone.

victor

"I don't think it's safe sir...! It seems like a predator..." victor tried to persuade him...

Dante black

Dante gave Victor a cold, frightening glare and said, "I’m going, no matter what."

The ship was heading towards the strange creature... the beautiful voice was laughing... Talking something strange and singing...and clapping, attracting all the sailors... it felt like everyone was hypnotized by the voice...

victor

"SIR... THAT'S A REAL LIFE MERMAID..!!" Victor whispered to him... feeling excited...

Dante black

Dante was looking at the creature with pure hatred, he was disgusted "that's the male siren, the evilest of them all..."

The male siren was a beautiful young boy, who had long hair, sharp features, smaller body than Dante but the long beautiful tail, with blue gleaming eyes

The siren looked at Dante ... Glaring him with his sharp blue eyes, Siren hissed like a snake to warn people not to get anymore closer... And continued to sing

Siren's hiss echoes through the night, sending shivers down the spine of the sailors... but Dante was amused, he was amused to see the mythical creature was right In front of him..

Dante black

"Prepare the nets ... We're going to catch this creature tonight... I want him whatever it takes .." Dante was still staring at the Siren...

victor

"Yes sir... " (I think it's not a good idea... but I have to obey his words)

That's it for today I guess ❤️ tell me in the comments about my performance