author don't get me wrong but this story needs a lot of serious fixes names are mixed up pace is weird the interactions are awkward plots don't land first take one thing at a time clear it then move to next problem but here it's pretty jumbled the idea is awesome your english, grammer all of it it good but these plot holes makes it a bumpy ride
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pheonix glider
author don't get me wrong but this story needs a lot of serious fixes names are mixed up pace is weird the interactions are awkward plots don't land first take one thing at a time clear it then move to next problem but here it's pretty jumbled
the idea is awesome your english, grammer all of it it good but these plot holes makes it a bumpy ride
2025-06-19
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Fairyveil 💫
so the previous story ended 😭😞😭😭😞
2025-07-21
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