Authy, please don't mind me saying this but I feel like something is missing in this story while reading becoz as I read all your stories I saw it's always ML's who actually keep 100% efforts and all FL's only keep 50% efforts in everything but still their stories are perfect but in this story I feel the FL is not even giving 20% efforts I swear i'm not being partial, i felt that becoz there is not even few scenes where u showed that FL actually felt that sparks of love or other feelings towards ML and why she felt them so it's like she loves ML just like that without any proper moments ( i wish u can understand what i'm trying to say) /Sweat/
2025-01-27
11
Arpita Gaikwad
can I get a shot out as today is my birthday from main leads
2025-01-27
1
chocoooooo
update one more episode plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss update
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Nisha
Authy, please don't mind me saying this but I feel like something is missing in this story while reading becoz as I read all your stories I saw it's always ML's who actually keep 100% efforts and all FL's only keep 50% efforts in everything but still their stories are perfect but in this story I feel the FL is not even giving 20% efforts I swear i'm not being partial, i felt that becoz there is not even few scenes where u showed that FL actually felt that sparks of love or other feelings towards ML and why she felt them so it's like she loves ML just like that without any proper moments ( i wish u can understand what i'm trying to say) /Sweat/
2025-01-27
11
Arpita Gaikwad
can I get a shot out as today is my birthday from main leads
2025-01-27
1
chocoooooo
update one more episode plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss plsssssssssssssss plsssssss update
2025-01-27
2