Hey authorshii I really enjoyed your story — your effort and passion truly shine through! Thank you for sharing such a creative piece, and I can tell you’ve put a lot of heart into it. 🧡 But I think ( it's just my opinion and I mean no harm towards u nor ur feelings ) u should develop their characters a little .. It's becoming hard to understand who is what and who is what not .It's becoming more and more confusing for me to understand . please be little more specific about their character please 🤍
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Aki
Hey authorshii
I really enjoyed your story — your effort and passion truly shine through! Thank you for sharing such a creative piece, and I can tell you’ve put a lot of heart into it. 🧡
But I think ( it's just my opinion and I mean no harm towards u nor ur feelings ) u should develop their characters a little ..
It's becoming hard to understand who is what and who is what not .It's becoming more and more confusing for me to understand . please be little more specific about their character please 🤍
2025-06-04
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l·loňè věřśè.⁰
authyyyyy update fast na
2025-06-05
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