when I read it I thought it was a complete story but 😭 it's just the starting part actually I didn't see it's chapter I just read it bec it was good..... author how many chapters are there please update soon
2025-05-15
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Belle
Plot of story is okay but you need to improve your sentences author it’s very hard to read with the many grammatical mistakes 🙏
2025-05-18
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Belle
Bruh he was seven years old even if he push your father your father would be fine what is wrong with your brain dude
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when I read it I thought it was a complete story but 😭 it's just the starting part actually I didn't see it's chapter I just read it bec it was good..... author how many chapters are there please update soon
2025-05-15
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Belle
Plot of story is okay but you need to improve your sentences author it’s very hard to read with the many grammatical mistakes 🙏
2025-05-18
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Belle
Bruh he was seven years old even if he push your father your father would be fine what is wrong with your brain dude
2025-05-18
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