tell me instead of yell, it changes the meaning!! I really would like to help you to correct the writing, there are many mistakes, it is a good novel but it good be better if it is well written.
2022-02-13
0
kim jung si min
author love from 🇮🇳India
2021-03-02
1
blossom cotton
author it should be 'gave her juice to drink ' not have
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Adriana Limon Illescas
tell me instead of yell, it changes the meaning!! I really would like to help you to correct the writing, there are many mistakes, it is a good novel but it good be better if it is well written.
2022-02-13
0
kim jung si min
author love from 🇮🇳India
2021-03-02
1
blossom cotton
author it should be 'gave her juice to drink ' not have
2020-07-18
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