honestly, the story is good but the pacing is too fast. even if you want to write a short story with less chapters, it should at least connect with the readers. Please don't get me wrong, it's great you can write stories since i myself can't write even half of what you did. But i love to read and have read many many stories, and i have always been transparent with my comments. I hope you do better dear author 👍
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Heartfilia08
honestly, the story is good but the pacing is too fast. even if you want to write a short story with less chapters, it should at least connect with the readers.
Please don't get me wrong, it's great you can write stories since i myself can't write even half of what you did.
But i love to read and have read many many stories, and i have always been transparent with my comments. I hope you do better dear author 👍
2025-02-10
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