Evil Hunt (Vminkook) (Taekook) (Jikook) (Vmin)
DNA
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please comment more and let me know your opinions on this story
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I'm not understanding whether you guys are liking the story or not and whether my writing is good or confusing
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and I want to know your opinions and suggestions as well for the further chapters🥺
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I'm barely getting a few likes and no comments this is making me think that the story is boring and not good😗😗
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Jungook
*sitting in his chair and analysing the case*
Jimin
*sitting infront of him*
Jimin
Did you send that cloth to the forensic lab?
Jimin
And what about the forensic reports of yesterday's case?
Jungook
We will get it by today
Jimin
okay *lean onto the table*
Jk is anxious and watching the cctv footage again and again
Jimin
yah stop it now... you will not get anything by watching it these many times *bored*
Jungook
Sam said that there was a black dress guy at the bus stop and there is no one else around there
Jungook
and here in the footage a black dress guy helped him *looking at Jimin*
Jimin
There are 3 different size and model of shoe prints over there....so someone might have knocked Sam and that black dress guy helped him *shrug*
Jungook
okay let's think like that
Jungook
Just imagine won't you be scared or something if someone knocked a guy infront of you?? *raise his brow*
Jimin
I will definitely be scared and run away from there *look away*
Jungook
I will try to protect him *proud*
Jimin
sure sure *roll his eyes*
Jimin
Keep this case aside....what did you analyse about yesterday's case??
Jungook
I've inquired about her at her office and at her apartment.... everyone said that she is a good and gentle woman
Jungook
she doesn't have any enemies or clashes with anyone
Jungook
That murderer must have planned it very well! *clench his fist*
Jungook
there are no cctv cameras in that area and around that area *sigh in frustration*
Jimin
woh calmdown kookie *caress his hand*
Jungook
*shiver at his touch*
Jimin
Take a break for awhile let's talk about it later
Jungook
I don't want to delay it
Jimin
Let's go and have lunch *hold his hand and pull him*
Jungook
yah *came closer to Jimin*
Jimin
*looking into Kook's eyes closely*
Jungook
*lost in his eyes*
Jimin is holding Kook's hand and both of them are standing very closely by looking into eachother's eyes
Jimin
your bambi eyes are cute *giggles*
Jungook
*slightly blush and look away*
Someone knocked the door and enter in
Yeonjun
Sir Rose's DNA reports are here
Yeonjun
*forward the reports to Kook*
Jungook
*sit in his chair and checking the details*
POSTMORTEM REPORT :
NAME: ROSE
AGE: 26
CAUSE OF DEATH : DUE TO LOSS OF BLOOD AND DUE TO THE DEEP CUT OF ORGANS AND INTERNAL INJURIES
INJURIES : WOUND ON THE BACK OF HEAD SEEMS TO BE A RUSTED ROD STRIKE AND A CUT ON STOMACH WHICH LEADS TO BLEED INTERNALLY
GUESSED WEAPONS : RUSTED IRON ROD AND A 5 INCHES CARVING KNIFE
DNA REPORTS : FOUND TWO DIFFERENT DNAs AT THE WOUND
Jungook
Two different DNAs?? *amused*
Kook shows the DNA reports to Jimin
Jimin
*Read it and amused* Could it be the murderer's DNA??
Jungook
Who knows *thinking*
Jimin
They found different DNAs at the wound that means the weapon must have had another DNA on it already *serious*
Jungook
Does that mean he killed someone else before? *raise his brow*
Jimin
Maybe or May not be *confused*
At an unknown shabby house
Namjoon
*writing something seriously*
Joon is sitting in a shabby room which is filled with books
He is sitting in a chair at the study table and there is a study lamp on it
He is writing something very seriously and there are many rough papers on the floor and dustbin...which are crumbled and thrown away
Namjoon
*strike it off and crush the paper again and throw it away*
Namjoon
Aish! *bang his head on the table gently*
Namjoon
This is not gonna work! I should go out now *get up and walk towards the cupboard*
Namjoon walked towards the cupboard and opened it...there are not so many clothes present in it
Namjoon
*take out a black cap and coat and wear it*
Namjoon
*walk out from there*
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Comments
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2024-11-11
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2024-11-11
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i am reading as long as you are getting even one comment on your story then it means you are doing good which you are, continue writing many are reading dw
2024-11-12
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