author don't give up on your writing skill your writing skill is really good 👍 about negative comments take it a sidewalk and feel free to write on your own way some readers discouraged about story but take it a positive way and think as it is also a part of your comments we can't change there view but we can take it as side dish as your pervious story is really amazing and this will be become successful so don't worry 😊 and take it as a flow of this best of luck 👍 ✨
2024-10-27
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Ms. Hot Headed
puff hahaha /Facepalm//Facepalm//Facepalm//Facepalm/ ek air motive hai na tera iske peeche ki dubara kabhi yeh agni banke koi kaand kare toh tu isko pehchaan paaye/Blackmoon//Blackmoon/
2025-02-23
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Beautiful Soul
Author your story is absolutely amazing and there is nothing to point out ...what I am waiting for is him to find out that the one is searching for is the is his wife that's all ... its just too much thrilling and The curiosity is killing me 😭.. & one of the main reason is I am not a kind of patient person so I am loosing it but the story is good Don't feel disappointed and let him ( Ml )know about her (FL)😅😁😁/Grin/
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author don't give up on your writing skill
your writing skill is really good 👍
about negative comments take it a sidewalk and feel free to write on your own way
some readers discouraged about story but take it a positive way and think as it is also a part of your comments
we can't change there view but we can take it as side dish
as your pervious story is really amazing and this will be become successful so don't worry 😊 and take it as a flow of this
best of luck 👍 ✨
2024-10-27
2
Ms. Hot Headed
puff hahaha /Facepalm//Facepalm//Facepalm//Facepalm/
ek air motive hai na tera iske peeche ki dubara kabhi yeh agni banke koi kaand kare toh tu isko pehchaan paaye/Blackmoon//Blackmoon/
2025-02-23
0
Beautiful Soul
Author your story is absolutely amazing and there is nothing to point out ...what I am waiting for is him to find out that the one is searching for is the is his wife that's all ... its just too much thrilling and The curiosity is killing me 😭.. & one of the main reason is I am not a kind of patient person so I am loosing it but the story is good Don't feel disappointed and let him ( Ml )know about her (FL)😅😁😁/Grin/
2024-10-27
0