I’m a new reader to your wonderful story but I wanted to suggest if maybe you could let the action be in asterisks or in a bracket. For example “ I want to sleep*goes towards the bed and lays on it* or I want to sleep ( goes towards the bed and lays on it). But all the same the story is interesting and it’s the best. I just wanted to suggest this. Hope you don’t mind 😊
2025-04-22
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Kris
iam sorry guys.... i was crazy while writing this chapter so i didn't see the mistake... it's Austin's pov 😁 forgive me 😓💐💐💐
2025-02-26
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fifa
ofcourse this is what family means... just go and marry him bro
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I’m a new reader to your wonderful story but I wanted to suggest if maybe you could let the action be in asterisks or in a bracket. For example “ I want to sleep*goes towards the bed and lays on it* or I want to sleep ( goes towards the bed and lays on it). But all the same the story is interesting and it’s the best. I just wanted to suggest this. Hope you don’t mind 😊
2025-04-22
1
Kris
iam sorry guys.... i was crazy while writing this chapter so i didn't see the mistake... it's Austin's pov 😁 forgive me 😓💐💐💐
2025-02-26
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fifa
ofcourse this is what family means... just go and marry him bro
2025-04-12
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