Ok so I won't be biased here and express my opinion-
1) Her way of expressing her pov was extremely wrong. She said your writing is bad ( I will come over this later) but her own comments have SO many grammatical errors. I'm myself not very good in english but come on, her comments had too many mistakes which I can ignore but she should have some reality check.
2) I read your previous book runaway marriage and I will say that that book was little childish and I couldn't completely read it. Had lots of grammatical errors which I can ignore but the book's plot was very childish to start with. Every character was childish there. Take it as a healthy criticism 😅
3) When you write stories it's necessary to put sweet, cringe, funny scenes but if you make every single character so childish then it's boring. funny/sweet scenes doesn't mean they have to be childish. I'm sure you must be a reader yourself, try to read more good books and learn from there. It's ok to learn while reading others books, i do it myself.
4) This book wasn't bad actually. Few grammatical errors but overall it was fine. The plot was good enough to make me read till the end and not leave in between like your "runaway marriage" book. I liked Jungkook's and Tae's character and later understood ye ji's side too.
Try to always improve your writing and don't stop your hobby. good luck 😊
2024-10-05
5
Lucky
Author please don't mind her/him if we give attention so much to her and give justification to her then she or he will take advantage and do more things and till now from that comments I think she/he will hurt you more so don't give attention and all she will go herself if we readers and author don't care about her and About you author you are already doing well so don't be demotivate because we readers like no love your story sooooo much and we will support you always think positive fighting ✊✊🥰❤
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Daisy
Ok so I won't be biased here and express my opinion-
1) Her way of expressing her pov was extremely wrong. She said your writing is bad ( I will come over this later) but her own comments have SO many grammatical errors. I'm myself not very good in english but come on, her comments had too many mistakes which I can ignore but she should have some reality check.
2) I read your previous book runaway marriage and I will say that that book was little childish and I couldn't completely read it. Had lots of grammatical errors which I can ignore but the book's plot was very childish to start with. Every character was childish there. Take it as a healthy criticism 😅
3) When you write stories it's necessary to put sweet, cringe, funny scenes but if you make every single character so childish then it's boring. funny/sweet scenes doesn't mean they have to be childish. I'm sure you must be a reader yourself, try to read more good books and learn from there. It's ok to learn while reading others books, i do it myself.
4) This book wasn't bad actually. Few grammatical errors but overall it was fine. The plot was good enough to make me read till the end and not leave in between like your "runaway marriage" book. I liked Jungkook's and Tae's character and later understood ye ji's side too.
Try to always improve your writing and don't stop your hobby. good luck 😊
2024-10-05
5
Lucky
Author please don't mind her/him if we give attention so much to her and give justification to her then she or he will take advantage and do more things and till now from that comments I think she/he will hurt you more so don't give attention and all she will go herself if we readers and author don't care about her and About you author you are already doing well so don't be demotivate because we readers like no love your story sooooo much and we will support you always think positive fighting ✊✊🥰❤
2024-10-05
2
sasha~🎀
because you think so( ╹▽╹ )
2024-10-05
1