yeah I wanted to add, if u don't mind change the picture if the story page u know what I mean ??? there is way better out there don't forget the eye attract first then the mind ! ur story is very good nd deserve recognition but the pfp isn't it !! I was hesitating at first to even open cause I didn't find the pic appealing ....don't take anything to heart it's not a critic I just want some shine on ur work ❤❤❤
2024-09-26
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Venizia
GREAT 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 U DID SO WELL !!! thank u for the lengths of the chapters! I always complain when it's too short u don't even have the time to feel the words! so thank you ❤
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Venizia
yeah I wanted to add, if u don't mind change the picture if the story page u know what I mean ??? there is way better out there don't forget the eye attract first then the mind ! ur story is very good nd deserve recognition but the pfp isn't it !! I was hesitating at first to even open cause I didn't find the pic appealing ....don't take anything to heart it's not a critic I just want some shine on ur work ❤❤❤
2024-09-26
1
Venizia
GREAT 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 U DID SO WELL !!! thank u for the lengths of the chapters! I always complain when it's too short u don't even have the time to feel the words! so thank you ❤
2024-09-26
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Venizia
❤❤😍😍😍 ughh perfect
2024-09-26
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