Well ! That's too short . And hope you will not put your dialogues in between story .... I mean you can put your dialogues but just a few times . That's my advice for you . 😍😍
Now for story :
Well they are going to be brother and sister but don't put it now . Wait for some time and make the story more interesting . Waiting for chapters
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Amiya {Ayima} is dead☠️
Well ! That's too short . And hope you will not put your dialogues in between story .... I mean you can put your dialogues but just a few times . That's my advice for you . 😍😍
Now for story :
Well they are going to be brother and sister but don't put it now . Wait for some time and make the story more interesting . Waiting for chapters
2020-08-25
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