you are doing great 👍🏻💯 keep it up . Just maybe increase the length of ur episode and since you give very slow updates .... give a summary at the starting cause many will forget what happened in the previous chapters . Other than that you everything is good . You don't use too hard words and make it simple in understanding and you are focused of the plot and don't go off the track . It's really good . I am looking. forward for more episodes
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Baby Moon Princess✨
you are doing great 👍🏻💯 keep it up . Just maybe increase the length of ur episode and since you give very slow updates .... give a summary at the starting cause many will forget what happened in the previous chapters . Other than that you everything is good . You don't use too hard words and make it simple in understanding and you are focused of the plot and don't go off the track . It's really good . I am looking. forward for more episodes
2025-01-09
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bonaponoya
bro knew what he was doing
2025-02-08
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bonaponoya
by the way love your story authorshii
2025-02-08
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