Chapter - 11
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Fixing her bangles*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
This saree gets stuck in these *Shook her head*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Let's go, Already late
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
Yes, but you didn't change
He said nothing and walked towards her while she was silently looking at him
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
I will not take too long. *Smirked and walked away*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Blinking*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
That's the same line he said that day, right? ^_^
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
Pervert 😐
There were so many people around and havan was going on
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Eyes burning because of smoke*
She wasn't able to focus on the yagya and was closing her eyes again and again because of her burning eyes
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
(Gosh! I can't sit here..*Tears flowing*)
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Hey, Are you okay wifey? *Whispered*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
My eyes are burning *Whispered back to him*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
If you want we can just go from here *Looked at her*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
.. No.. It's not appropriate to go I think.
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
But you aren't able to open your eyes.
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
It's okay, Only few more minutes..*Smiled a little*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
*Went silent*
Diksha Chauhan [ML's cousin]
*Coughing*
Karan Maheshwari [ML's brother]
It's so much smoke in here *Fanning himself*
Diksha Chauhan [ML's cousin]
I don't know how bhai and bhabhi is handling this, I really want to go out from here *Cough* I can't stay here *Shook her head and walked out*
Karan Maheshwari [ML's brother]
Hey, wait I am also coming *Followed her*
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
Oh god, It's so much smoke Raj.
Rajendra Maheshwari [ML's Father]
Yes, I think we should ask pandit ji to do something about it. *Nodded*
Random Relative
It's a test of bride and groom. Let it be Rajendra. You can't interrupt the havan like that.
Rajendra Maheshwari [ML's Father]
But if it's causing trouble in breathing then I don't think we should continue this.
They were talking, while Mukti was not able to handle the smoke
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Rubbing her eyes*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Mukti, Let's go from here..!
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
What a mess! *Murmured getting angry*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
Oh my god, It's burning. Give me water I want to wash my eyes. *Rubbing her eyes*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Get up Mukti! Come with me!*Held her hand and stood up immediately*
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
Mukti..!
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Here water *Hurriedly gave her*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Washed her face*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Are you okay? *Asked gently*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
I am okay *Nodded*
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
Here towel *Gave her the towel*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Took it silently*
Relative
But it's ominous to get up when havan is going on.
Random Relative
Obviously, DIL you could've tolerated a bit more. It was not a real big deal. We all are also here. Look nothing happened to us.
Relative
They are just not interested in our rituals. Today's generation
*Shook head*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
She-
Rajendra Maheshwari [ML's Father]
Let's not talk about such stupid things. It was not intentional.
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
*Shut his mouth*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Silently looking at everyone*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
(Did I spoil everyone's mood? There is a conflict because of me. What a chaos has been created? 🥲)
Random Relative
Rajendra, It's about how much she can tolerate for the sake of Pooja.
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
*Jaw clenching*
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
Why would she tolerate anything? She is here to live like our own daughter, and she is our responsibility.
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
(My MIL and FIL is defending me.. So sweet 🥹)
Karan Maheshwari [ML's brother]
Exactly.
Diksha Chauhan [ML's cousin]
Aag me ghee mat dal bevkoof *Pinched him from back*
[Don't add fuel the fire idiot]
Karan Maheshwari [ML's brother]
Ouch!
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
What happened to you?
Karan Maheshwari [ML's brother]
N.. Nothing maa..*Nervously smiled*
Rajendra Maheshwari [ML's Father]
Let's end this here.
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
Yes, Mukti beta rest for sometime. After that we will complete remaining things.... Only if you are comfortable.
Ragini Maheshwari [ML's Mother]
*Said the last part while looking at the ladies*
Mukti Kulkarni [FL]
*Nodded silently*
Samarth Maheshwari [ML]
Let's go *Held her hand and walked away from there as soon as his mother completed*
I did not mean to disrespect our Indian culture or anything at all. This is just a fiction and please don't take it seriously.
Such things rarely happens in real life like the fire gets too smokey or something.
See you in the next update ❤️
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Comments
Goutami
you didn't disrespect. everything is fine. honestly some parts of India doesn't have this culture. even though we are hindu. so it's alright
2025-01-29
4
Goutami
shut up old fàrt
2025-01-29
3
Goutami
shut up. the only thing ominous here is your presence
2025-01-29
5