and it's already 65 episodes where we never read about harsh expressive thoughts and he never take any initiative towards fl which we read in your one more time chat story.That story feel like we are seeing infront of us .the characters are feeling so lively.where about this story it's feel like we are reading only anvi other are just passer by.even the ml also!!!!! so make some changes in the story.even we are giving you hints in many previous chapters but same thing is going on.
2024-08-31
10
silvia
yup because ml is not making scenes their he became mute. we are only reading fl pov,fl excitement and fear only.there no initiative of talk in ml to the fl.
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Reverie
nahi bhai
2024-10-04
2
silvia
and it's already 65 episodes where we never read about harsh expressive thoughts and he never take any initiative towards fl which we read in your one more time chat story.That story feel like we are seeing infront of us .the characters are feeling so lively.where about this story it's feel like we are reading only anvi other are just passer by.even the ml also!!!!! so make some changes in the story.even we are giving you hints in many previous chapters but same thing is going on.
2024-08-31
10
silvia
yup because ml is not making scenes their he became mute. we are only reading fl pov,fl excitement and fear only.there no initiative of talk in ml to the fl.
2024-08-31
1