Well, author not sounding rude but Her behaviour this time is wrong towards him.... From the words it's looking like that she isn't appreciating his affection like related to first kiss( where he should have experience)...thus she should see that he is loyal and one time guy not a Playboy
From my point of view(its soley mine please don't be upset) female lead should have character development like you know having a boyfriend and still thinking about other boy body, how hot he is and so on... it's ok if it's first time but now it is happening in constant manner and that gives the insecurity feeling to the boy so, I think you should try to make her more and more affectionate towards boy just like how he is trying to be.....
Otherwise your story is fun reading and entertaining just this glitch is there ... I know its a story but still.... Thank you, hope you take this comment in postive way and sorry if you feel offended anyhow
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Bharti Varshney
Well, author not sounding rude but Her behaviour this time is wrong towards him.... From the words it's looking like that she isn't appreciating his affection like related to first kiss( where he should have experience)...thus she should see that he is loyal and one time guy not a Playboy
From my point of view(its soley mine please don't be upset) female lead should have character development like you know having a boyfriend and still thinking about other boy body, how hot he is and so on... it's ok if it's first time but now it is happening in constant manner and that gives the insecurity feeling to the boy so, I think you should try to make her more and more affectionate towards boy just like how he is trying to be.....
Otherwise your story is fun reading and entertaining just this glitch is there ... I know its a story but still....
Thank you, hope you take this comment in postive way and sorry if you feel offended anyhow
2025-04-14
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2025-04-14
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