this is very hard for Noah and Aaron right why did you make Aaron now you can make him came more later if you want to write this type of scenes like you make him came when Casper insert himself in noah you don't is right now you want to write like something like this everything is not okay with the character with the story with the author I don't know you want to make your story longer I just want to end it don't anything about this but what you have written right now I did not like I am not the person who is very sensitive okay
2025-05-27
16
Pavanajogi N N
I personally don't like this chapter because Noah's fast memories are very dark and now also it's not dark I don't have words to say.....😡 Now how will he come out of that dark side even I will attend sucide or he will ignore Arona....
author please make it right now if arona kills his cousin's brother it's common only but what happenstance is to noah is not forgiveness......
2025-05-27
1
tae_koo
I did not like this part I was just bring that something will not happen wrong with my baby my poor noah baby but you did this why you guys you all author right something like this when you know how much it affect to readers and the character you are writing that character also making your story long you can't at something like this okay
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tae_koo
this is very hard for Noah and Aaron right why did you make Aaron now you can make him came more later if you want to write this type of scenes like you make him came when Casper insert himself in noah you don't is right now you want to write like something like this everything is not okay with the character with the story with the author I don't know you want to make your story longer I just want to end it don't anything about this but what you have written right now I did not like I am not the person who is very sensitive okay
2025-05-27
16
Pavanajogi N N
I personally don't like this chapter because Noah's fast memories are very dark and now also it's not dark I don't have words to say.....😡 Now how will he come out of that dark side even I will attend sucide or he will ignore Arona....
author please make it right now
if arona kills his cousin's brother it's common only but what happenstance is to noah is not forgiveness......
2025-05-27
1
tae_koo
I did not like this part I was just bring that something will not happen wrong with my baby my poor noah baby but you did this why you guys you all author right something like this when you know how much it affect to readers and the character you are writing that character also making your story long you can't at something like this okay
2025-05-27
2