I'm in awe of the author's writing. The lines are mostly repeated twice or thrice, spellings are awful which i pretend not to notice but it's really hard to ignore. Regardless of the fact that you're rewriting this work, i just wish you could check them properly before uploading the chapters. Please don't mind my comment, I'm just opening up my thoughts. I do appreciate your hard work for doing this without benefits..but please just correct those mistakes. There are many comments where I saw someone trying to correct you, just like the one above. but it seems to be unnoticed by you
2025-10-19
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cute couch potatootie 🥔
did you just say THAT infront of his FIANCEE!!??/Puke//Puke/
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Heartfilia08
I'm in awe of the author's writing. The lines are mostly repeated twice or thrice, spellings are awful which i pretend not to notice but it's really hard to ignore. Regardless of the fact that you're rewriting this work, i just wish you could check them properly before uploading the chapters. Please don't mind my comment, I'm just opening up my thoughts. I do appreciate your hard work for doing this without benefits..but please just correct those mistakes. There are many comments where I saw someone trying to correct you, just like the one above. but it seems to be unnoticed by you
2025-10-19
  2
cute couch potatootie 🥔
did you just say THAT infront of his FIANCEE!!??/Puke//Puke/
2025-09-09
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Devil angel 😈😈😈😈😈
😂😂😂😂😂 good one
2025-10-19
  1