sorry to say author ur story has many loophole.... like why ml cheat on mc and u didn't even tell full story about villain why he did all of that .... and when ml again meet mc he didn't even tell mc what happen with his affair patner and then again how villain know about mc son that he is in hospital and even know that he is nc kid then why he kidnap him ..... why
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2024-12-10
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Swëêt Prëèt
sorry to say author ur story has many loophole.... like why ml cheat on mc and u didn't even tell full story about villain why he did all of that .... and when ml again meet mc he didn't even tell mc what happen with his affair patner and then again how villain know about mc son that he is in hospital and even know that he is nc kid then why he kidnap him ..... why
2024-10-15
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