I beleive with constructive feedback one has the potential to grow. Author for future, try to plan out your storyline more clearly. It is very hard to follow the entire story as there are too many large gaps and backstories missing making readers not enjoy the overall story. Your work has the potential to be a hit if you lay proper ground work on the characters story line and chemistry. I look forward to still reading more of your work ✌~an obsessed reader 👓
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🌺🏵Fantasy Dreamer 🌺🌸
I beleive with constructive feedback one has the potential to grow. Author for future, try to plan out your storyline more clearly. It is very hard to follow the entire story as there are too many large gaps and backstories missing making readers not enjoy the overall story. Your work has the potential to be a hit if you lay proper ground work on the characters story line and chemistry. I look forward to still reading more of your work ✌~an obsessed reader 👓
2024-12-05
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/Joyful//Facepalm//Facepalm//Facepalm/
2024-09-26
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Ylen Gm
very cutesy😊
2024-08-24
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