umm not to offend you author.....but there is something lacking in your story..... like emotions , expressions and it feels like they will be fine even after not meeting with each other....again ... I am not saying this to make you sad it's just I am quite worried about you as a fellow author.....ignore it if you feel offended... I tried to personally message you but I can't ....😐
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Purple haze
umm not to offend you author.....but there is something lacking in your story..... like emotions , expressions and it feels like they will be fine even after not meeting with each other....again ... I am not saying this to make you sad it's just I am quite worried about you as a fellow author.....ignore it if you feel offended... I tried to personally message you but I can't ....😐
2024-07-27
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