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"SOMETIMES WHO GIVE YOU THE SENSE OF BELONGING IS NOT ACTUALLY YOUR'S BUT BELONG TO SOMEONE ELSE."
"THIS STORY TITLED "NOT MINE" COMPLEMENT ABOVE NARRATION PERFECTLY."
"❄❄" mean in cold voice.
*...* means doing action.
"CAPITAL LETTERS" means in loud voice and shouting.
"(...)" means thinking.
"The Atmosphere Of The Dinning Table Was Pleasant. The Family Of Three People Was Enjoying Their Feast."
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Here, have this.
Riya put piece of meat in Novic plate.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Mom, stop putting food in my plate.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
I already have enough in my plate. *soft tone*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
At least, let me finish that first. *eating*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
You should eat more. You are skipping meals quiet often.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
It doesn't mean you full my plate at once and make a tiny soul eat like pig. *eye rolled*
Adam who was sitting silent took part in the family conversion with Protagonist dominant Voice and dialogue.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Stop nagging like child and eat quietly. *❄❄*
But soon a smack landed on his head making him realize that he has made mistake. Now he has to hear scolding from his wife.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
*smacked on Adam back head*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
ouch, darling it's hurts. *rub back of his head*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How many times I told both of you, don't try cold business with me.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Don't make face like that, you look ugly.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
But I was not saying that to you. Is said to this brat. *innocently point towards Novic*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
*glares*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Also with my son.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
You know dad, your cold tone picere my heart like a dagger.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Novic made a very sad face and said with full fake breaking tone.
Riya cup face of Novic with love and said.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Awwww, my child got hurt.
Adam looked in disbelief towards his son drama.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
You scared our son.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Keep your icy shits in deep freezer outside my house. *scolding tone*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*press lips to control laughter*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*look angrily towards Novic*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
But Babe, he is not sacred, just doing act.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Look he is laughing.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Are you trying to compete with me now. *raise her borrows*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
No, it's not like that.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Then, how it's like.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Babe. It was just slip of emotions. why are you so serious? *tiny voice*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Keep your emotions in balance when talk to family next time.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
otherwise I will not think twice before kicking you out of house. *glares*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Babe, why don't you join mafia. you have quite good qualifications regarding mafia.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
are you saying I am cruel.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
OMG, I never thought that you think of me like that. *keep hand on his chest*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Why I have to hear this from my Husband?
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
My husband doesn't love me any more. *crying*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Babe, I didn't mean like that.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Then, what was your reason of saying that.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
I was saying that your are beautiful, have good personality and aura. It makes you suitable for mafia.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
I,myself, often get intimated by your aura.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*Persuading his wife*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Really, you mean that.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
yeah, babe.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Liar. *mumble*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Did you say something, my dear son. *grit teeth with smile*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Nothing. *smile back*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Don't say, something like that again, sweetie.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
It doesn't suit your poker face.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*ptts*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
understand.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
yeah babe.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*looked at Novic*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*eating quietly with teasing smile*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Why are you smiling so brightly, brat. *annoyed*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
I am just enjoying my meal, Mr Adam.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Are not you enjoying it to much. *narrows his eyes*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Well, I just happen to see Tom & Jerry show.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Count this show on your list, I will broadcast a show of you soon.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Let's see, Mr Adam.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Brat, it's dad for you not Mr Adam.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Ohhhhhhhh, my Gowd, I forgot that.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Thanks for reminding me.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Stop bickering and eat food.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*stuff food into mouth angrily*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
*chuckle*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
These two always bicker like child, sometimes it looks like I have two child's.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*enjoying his father expressions*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How is everything going in office, Novic.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Good.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How is preparation of party going?
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Everything is set don't worry Mom.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
hmmmm.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*look at his mom*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
What happen Mom, do you want to say something?
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*looked at Riya*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
*looked at Adam*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Why are you look at each other face, just say it.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*took a bite*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
We met Alice this afternoon.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*expressions stiffened suddenly*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Nov, *try to gain attention by calling his name*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
hmmmm.
Novic face stiffened and his eyes becomes cold. Adam and Riya noticed the change in his expressions.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
He came back from abroad last month.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
That's good for him. *not interested*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*focused on food in his plate*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
We invited him in the party.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
I and your mom decided to introduce him in the party.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*put the knife and fork down*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*got up from chair*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
I am full.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*left from there*
Novic was going to his room when voice of Riya halt his steps.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
He is your brother.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How long you are going to be childish?
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Stop being stubborn.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
Mom, one last time I am saying this.
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
He is not my brother. He is my biggest enemy in the world. *❄❄❄*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Stop sprouting non- sense ❄❄
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Is this how you refer to your family? ❄❄
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
HE IS NOT MY FAMILY. ❄❄ *SHOUT*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
What are you saying?
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
I AM SAYING TRUTH. HE IS NOT ALLOWED INTO MY FAMILY. ❄❄
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
DON'T RAISE YOUR VOICE, NOV. ❄❄❄
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*kick the vase beside him hard*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
I FU*KING HATE THIS
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
HATE THIS. *Shout agressively*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*change his way towards the outside*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Baby. *run behind him while calling his name*
Novic Kemp Fitzgerald (ML)
*leave the mansion ignoring his mother voice behind*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How can he hate him so much? *teary eyes*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Don't worry, I'll talk to him. *patted her back*
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
How can I not worry Adam?
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
They are brother, I was happy that finally we got both our sons.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
But they are not happy to see each other.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
They were best friends, but what happened to them suddenly?
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Riya, calm down. *hug her*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
I will find the reason soon.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Just give some time, maybe they sort out themselves.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
I can't see them like that.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Focus on meeting our daughter-in-law and grandson.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
*changing subject*
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Don't stress yourself, otherwise they will get sacred by seeing your dull face.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
That's not a time for joking.
Mr.Adam Fitzgerald
Everything will be alright.
Mrs.Riya Fitzgerald
Hope so.
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