Tbh.... you need to add some more suspense and thrill into it the most of the parts are of the ml and fl but if you'll show a villain in your story then it'll be more interesting you know I'm just suggesting you if you want to do this you can 😊 well I'm not saying you're story isn't good I'm just saying you should add some more
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Divine🥀
Tbh.... you need to add some more suspense and thrill into it the most of the parts are of the ml and fl but if you'll show a villain in your story then it'll be more interesting you know I'm just suggesting you if you want to do this you can 😊 well I'm not saying you're story isn't good I'm just saying you should add some more
2024-10-02
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Mafia's princess (babygirl😏 )
Well it's true 😅
2024-09-08
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Mafia's princess (babygirl😏 )
She literally told u her name mister 😑
2024-09-08
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