I rarely comment on stories, but I need to say this — first of all, no hate to the author. I love her work and have read more than half of her stories. But this one really stressed me out. I don’t understand how people justify the ML when he literally raped the FL multiple times, killed her parents (and his own), and murdered an innocent person just because the FL met him (remember the park scene?).
He’s a psychopath,a rapist , yet people want him to have a happy ending with the FL — why? I was honestly traumatized reading this. The FL knows everything but still falls for him — I get the mental illness part, but still.
Yes, she killed her sister — and the pain she’s been through is insane — but that doesn’t make the ML’s actions okay. Some people say, “He deserve a good ending with FL .” Bro seriously? Just think about how twisted that is and I am not justifying FL action.
And yes, I know people will say “just stop reading.” I tried, but the plot hooked me, and I trusted the author to handle it well. I just hope author doesn’t change the ending just to satisfy some 14–15-year-old fans.
2025-06-29
6
SAM
please don't take stress by some comments, ik a lot of readers gonna say do this do that, but please listen to yourself it's your story, because of your uniqueness we are attracted to your story, if you already decided end ik it will better for them and for readers too, who read your story carefully, because no other readers going to understand how deep it's to handle it's easy to say that let them stay together but trust me no one going to handle a person like Daniel, all the best. 💓💜 and thank you so much for this masterpiece 🙏🏻
2025-06-29
9
Smile
yes author even though it's sad to see Daniel death but this is the best ending for this story..... I mean those army members killing daniel will be different but Daniel killing himself is whole different.... you know author when FL died in your story "villainess who's the father of the child " I felt unfair for both lead roles but in this story Daniel's death is fair and justified... if in the end ML and FL stayed together the whole 200 chapters story will be meaningless author... so even though I'm sad about Daniel's death it's the best ending for this story..../Cry//Cry//Cry/
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@_mindseries
I rarely comment on stories, but I need to say this — first of all, no hate to the author. I love her work and have read more than half of her stories. But this one really stressed me out. I don’t understand how people justify the ML when he literally raped the FL multiple times, killed her parents (and his own), and murdered an innocent person just because the FL met him (remember the park scene?).
He’s a psychopath,a rapist , yet people want him to have a happy ending with the FL — why? I was honestly traumatized reading this. The FL knows everything but still falls for him — I get the mental illness part, but still.
Yes, she killed her sister — and the pain she’s been through is insane — but that doesn’t make the ML’s actions okay. Some people say, “He deserve a good ending with FL .” Bro seriously? Just think about how twisted that is and I am not justifying FL action.
And yes, I know people will say “just stop reading.” I tried, but the plot hooked me, and I trusted the author to handle it well. I just hope author doesn’t change the ending just to satisfy some 14–15-year-old fans.
2025-06-29
6
SAM
please don't take stress by some comments, ik a lot of readers gonna say do this do that, but please listen to yourself it's your story, because of your uniqueness we are attracted to your story, if you already decided end ik it will better for them and for readers too, who read your story carefully, because no other readers going to understand how deep it's to handle it's easy to say that let them stay together but trust me no one going to handle a person like Daniel, all the best. 💓💜 and thank you so much for this masterpiece 🙏🏻
2025-06-29
9
Smile
yes author even though it's sad to see Daniel death but this is the best ending for this story..... I mean those army members killing daniel will be different but Daniel killing himself is whole different....
you know author when FL died in your story "villainess who's the father of the child " I felt unfair for both lead roles but in this story Daniel's death is fair and justified... if in the end ML and FL stayed together the whole 200 chapters story will be meaningless author... so even though I'm sad about Daniel's death it's the best ending for this story..../Cry//Cry//Cry/
2025-06-29
6