authershii don't you think you are giving so much unnecessary details I advice you not to do it cause it makes reading hella boring and people will ignore this story trust me you are giving too many unnecessary details and your writing style is very simple and plain...eight chapters in I guess ? and you didn't even give a single hint on the plot most people will ignore this type of story generally just my honest opinion you should focus on what I said and else it depends on you
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~𝕮𝖗𝖎𝖓𝖌𝖊𝖞 𝖘𝖖𝖚𝖎𝖗𝖗𝖞
authershii don't you think you are giving so much unnecessary details I advice you not to do it cause it makes reading hella boring and people will ignore this story trust me you are giving too many unnecessary details and your writing style is very simple and plain...eight chapters in I guess ? and you didn't even give a single hint on the plot most people will ignore this type of story generally just my honest opinion you should focus on what I said and else it depends on you
2024-12-09
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𝓐𝓾𝓼𝓹𝓲𝓬𝓲𝓸𝓾𝓼 𝓑𝓵𝓾𝓮
peek a boo love ❤️
2024-08-30
1
Your Daisy~🌼
it's ok... cause he didn't die at least....
2024-08-18
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